Wednesday 31 October 2018

Persuasive Writing

WALT: we are learning to write a persuasive piece.


Pokemon Go is a game that people catch Pokemon which are little monsters that they catch and hatch to go into battles with other people and Pokemon trainers.


Firstly, Pokemon Go is very dangerous! People get kidnapped while playing Pokemon go also people walk on the road just to catch one Pokemon when they could get squashed or walk of a cliff and Die. Two men in their early twenties who fell an estimate of 50 to 90 feet down a cliff in Encinitas California on a Wednesday afternoon while playing Pokemon go.

Another problem is it’s very addictive so they will start to forget their responsibilities so they will stop eating well and forget to feed their pet and lack of sleep. So they will die because they forget about all these things.

Thirdly, you can also spend lots of money just for things you don’t need like hatching more eggs. So you will spend all your money so you will go broke then you can’t spend money on food or water then you can’t pay your power and water bill then you can’t look after kids then you’ll be kicked out of house and live on the street then you will die because of lack of food and water.

In conclusion Pokemon go should be band so people won't fall of a cliff, spend all there money or there eyes go square. So people should stop playing this instant and do other things like play outside or anything you can imagine of.

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